Wow. That was amazing. Even after reading the title, I wasn't expecting the ending. That was a dismal poem, but extremely well written. I loved it. Kudos

I totally agree with Robyn on this one..such strong words put together to make an even stronger message. Awesome job, I only hope that things get better.

wow...i did not see that coming from the title...i really am hoping that things will get better for you!! my thoughts and prayers are with you in this time of need....i will be your helping hand okay!! love
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Kerrianne

awesome poem girl!!! loved it!!!

gr8 work ..
I enjoyed ur poem a lot .. keep it up !
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hey hun once again xcellent job...like it a lott