Wow! GREAT work! I love the whole concept of this... and the cool format you used! VERY NICE!

there are just a couple places that you used "you" in the line directly following the "For you" lead in...and I don't think it's necessary...
1) For you:
I'd build a snowman
2) For you:
I'd give (or make) summer in spring

just a couple suggestions... this is GREAT just the wayit is though!

Thanks a lot Ann Marie. Took your suggestions and did just a little more editing on the summer..spring..fall part (just changed in to be lol).

Also thanks a lot to you too Some Girl. Put a big smile on my face reading your comment, glad you loved it that much. Always brightens my day knowing that my work is appreciated. I might make a part 2 (big might depending on how I feel) so you might want to keep one eye out for that..:P

I loved this poem, someone around you is a very lucky soul indeed. Thanx for writing this, you are very talented. Love, Tim

Aww that was so sweet, very well written. You have so much talent. Never stop writing. Thank you for your comments on my poetry.. Until next time, take care, Sara

Love the format and structure...I'm steeling it btw:) This was an awesome idea for a poem. You gave it a kind of dream like quality. You put this together nicely...I'm impressed. This was really enjoyable..no doubt!

Kev

A wonderful poem! =) I loved it. You write very well and I loved your whole style of this one. Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

Excellent poem truly beautifully written :)

Great poem....keep them coming....take care ...FIVE

I love this poem more each time I read it! I like the change you made to that last stanza.