Amazing!

Not bein mean but two lines then break is kinda hard to read why not trying havin four lines then a gap!! part from that i liked it!!

This is a great poem

Excellent work. I love the content and the couplet rhyming scheme. Great job!

Christ May your name be Glorified.....Ilove your poem...

Loved it.
it is inspirational.
keep up the good work.