the imagry, symbolism, in depth words, i absolutly LOVED IT. This poem is so complex, telling it from that point of view, its amazing. you are so incredibly talented, your writing is just amazing...i hope your recognized for that.

wonderfully witten, very impressive. i loved it. very dark. sensual. great job
check mine out some time
again, great job
rose oxo

Wow, very impressive. I hope you are doing alright, this one was just so amazing. It left me in aww.

Megan §

some ffffin gr8 verses in this poem ..
it bonds really well ... i like it

wow what a great poem, great visualaztions. Great discrptions morbid but intense! I though this was an very impressive piece.