This poem rebukes those who thrive on sadism

You are a very passionate poem. Spirit and your heart and soul flow through the lines winding and intertwining with each word to make every letter come together as a whole. Very few males have I ever seen who can express their passion through poetry and it flow as well as yours. Very few males do I know that have a very high thought for poetry :) I have been writing poetry for only a year and a half. Most of the poetry I write is love and or sorrow. My love poems are for my boyfriend who makes me complete and the sorrowful poems are for the hate and hardships I must endure that are only a small part of life. This is a well written poem. I have read several of your works and I believe you are a great poet. Have you had any published? I've had only three so far. The hard thing is having a short enough poem that somebody will publish. The differences between you and I stand that you are short sweet and to the point whereas I am long, developed and explanitory. Also that I rhyme all of my poetry because I cannot bring myself to write something that does not. Point being: You're a great writer and I hope to read more of your work in the future. Keep me posted on new works. Very good piece. *5* Great Job

*~-._.-~*Ashley *~-._.-~*

Its a nice poem! but try writting in imagination!!! it would work better