wow, another great one...i really love your work thank you so much for sharing.
a sad one but none the less i loved it
kinda embarrassing but i seem to get misty eyed on alot of your poems :-[ =)
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lol, have a great one

Wow that was amazing. . . I LOVE IT! all the details and the movement and feelings just flow out of the page. Keep up the great writing.

Love, Taylor

honestly...it was a really good poem but I'm not too sure i like the new style...i think i like the other ways you've done it better...anyway...keep up the good work! its always good to try new things....

i loved it. no, don't change anything. i liked how you always start with 'silently'. i enjoyed reading it because i was eager to know what would happen 'silently' next. i loved the whole piece altogether. take care:)

Very cool verses. excellent.

that was kewl! I think that this poem really showed how you feel, but the way you did was very nice. good job Andrea!!!

Very nice - I enjoyed it.

wow!! nicely done! keep it up!

alwayz,
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i love your rhymes.. i wonder how you can come up with such brilliant poems?..

this poem was really great, really emotional, i really liked it, thanx for commenting my poems

nice poem, i liked it alot

This was really good...it did not rymn but it was still a poem that is a classic...it was pretty awesome...you have a great talent...keep up the great work...chows 4 now...jennie