I wrote this after hearing some very disturbing things about the execution of the hostages held by the terrorist... I do curse them...

Oh Wow this is a really nicely written poem. It expresses alot of emotion and really paints a picture in your mind. It is terrible some of the things that happen in our world..yeah I curse them too. Its disgusting the things people do to others.

Take Care,
Alysse

yeah, that perfectly fits the situation. *curses* they're so evil... well, you haven't lost your touch. your words put together mean a lot. especially on this piece. take care:)

hahaha i love this poem so much...its so perfect....

That was a great poem.. Even though i wonder what does the word "Orcishily" mean???? The poem showed different emotions.. A very sensible poem..

;) hehe, good spotting Trincy, "Orcishily" is not a real word, I made it up, suppose to mean "Orc like" or "brutal"... that word had to be used due to some reason that I can really share on here....

really well written i could feel the coldness and sadness in me when i read this poem it was so heartfelt and i absolutly loved it you put so much expression

hehe, nice. very....dark? i like it. it seems that this is more of a poem that is angry at the evil than a poem about the evil. interesting. peace out

ure right these kinda people must be cursed...great poem! :-)

Thank you everyone for reading and commenting, I really appriciate them all :) Im trying to build up this habbit of responing to people's comment... I'll try to respone to everyone in the future :)

Uh, I'm sure I've commented on this but since it seems I haven't I will again... well, just wanted to praise you on this brilliant piece of work, it's true, the people like this should definetely suffer. Horrible issue to write about, you wrote it well, well done!

Perfect. -End of.