Awesome poetry! scientific-and umm..
sensual towards the middle-end-
people should leave a comment if they
vote a 1. Losers i suppose. Thanks Tim
another tantalizing tale!

Hey just got time to read this and I liked it it was so close to a story and poem combined that I had to smile good job well will talk to you soon thumbs up

neat beyond the word excellent gives poetry a new mening the eminem of poetry you are congrads

Hey

Fascinating read!! cunningly written with visionary passion.

I look forward to reading more.

If you get chance, please check out my work, would be interested in your opinion!

Kind regards
Hayley