dark indeed.very good.

That was very good, you have a very vivid imagination!

Hey

This piece was very thought provoking...Actually a subject I am very interested in.
Honest, hard and very enigmatic writing.

Kind regards
Hayley

hey Jacki;
I dont know, i was reading this poem/story and at the end my eyes were filling up with tears, thats usually not like me either. Hmmm...Scarey..lol this poem was AMAZING and beautifully written. It was Very very sad but none the less great!
Take care
Scooby