Great poem, Holly! soooo sad!!!!!

If the baby had a name... how about making that the title of the poem...and I might make the last line of the poem include that... like if Ashley was the baby's name... make the last line: "As Mother (or mama) and Ashley, reunite!"

Its such a pleasure to read this poem by you Holly, after reading this poem, I htought of the title" Unfulfilled Promise", I hope you like dthe suggestion. Thanx for writing such a moving poem. Timothy r

That was soo incrediably sad and tragic. You definately have a way with words. Amazing work.