theres a great deal of inspiration in this poem .. i like it , i like the angle of thought .. i love this verse........ I can see the heartache left
The barrier you have created
The shield that leaves me struggling
From all those girls you’ve loved then hated.

impressive, great work there. Thanks for your comment on one of my poems

*gulp* wow great poem, really moving, emotion, inspirational and all other words i cant think of! great job