gud poem, kept makin me want to read on..heop you're not haunted by "them"

I like how you didn't give who "they" are. It makes the poem even that much more great. Cause now i'm like is like a 6th sence type of poem or are "they" girls or etc. This is just a great poem because it leaves me hanging like hmm i can make up my own ending to this and wonder. Great JOB!!

i like the aspect of not revealing who they are as well..because it allows the reader to apply the word they to their lives. such as the people who haunt the reader. people, animals, imaginary friends..etc.

wow...good poem i really liked it! i like the mystery behind the "they"..nice job! *kelleye*