hey. it needs a rhythm. then it would be awesome. no lie. but other than that...yeah.

Amazing
Fire o0o0o0o
Hehe :D
Kool poem

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
5/5

You make me want to cry, but in the good sence, I guess. That was something that if I had read it anytime but now, it wouldn't have understood the meaning, well at least what I got from it. Thank you.

You need to write more, cuz everything I've read of yours has been GREAT. Love it