So much emotion is portrayed in this poem, and I love it. I can totally relate to this. A picture captures only one emotion ... but you never really know what a person is thinking or feeling and that's what this poem says to me. If thats not the message, forgive me. But I really liked it. Excellent Job!!

I don't even know what to say. It'san awesome poem but you seem to have so much pain. Or is it that that's just how you write. I really hope it's not your life you write about. Take care.