Wow,this was beautiful and also the women of ur dreams...take care....FIVE

Hi robert

Was dying to come and check out some of your new posts hun and as per usual you never dissappoint! This was perfection as always the descriptions were so vivid and you did an amazing job painting the imagery of your perfect woman - such a unique topic too - really well done and worth more than the five i gave you!

Dont ever stop writing and your right babes if your gunna dream hell yeah...dream BIG!

Luv Always Eirisa xoxo

OMG! Reading the description in this poems my eyes were poping out!.. is there any girl in that shape?? Wow.. I would also like to meet that girl if you find her.. lol! i wish i were a guy then!! No that i am a girl i will have to pass her a jelousy look or fake a smile! :) joking.. YOur poem was great.. Its hard to define beauty... But you did it.. Dreams doesn't have limit.. then why limit them?? Good funda!!!

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

i love this poem it got me it like took my heart!! its was excellent even bigger then excellent i love it!!! GREAT JOB!

Wow this poem was excellent you used HUGE words and it was great i like how at the end you wrote "Hey, if I gonna dream, why not dream big? If I'm gonna reach, why not reach for the stars? I might not be able to have it all, but there's nothing wrong with wanting it!!! For the part in everyone of us that want it all... Here's to having your cake and eating it too!!!"