Are you the angel that must fly away
That angel of your's that seems to decay
So far from good your baddness may rein
But hidden behind angels you hide your true pain
Why do you cut?
To take away hurt
How does it work?
It diminishes the inner pains that lurk.

I loved your poem its deep and true and raw. Your real and you know whats out there you comprehend the pain and make good use of literary devices...I hope your angel lets you see another day, write another poem and doesnt let you go away...

AWESOME!! oh wow!! this is soo great!!! wow!! amazing!!

ANother great one. i loved it. its so deep and touching and i loved the comparisions with cutting and your hopes and i loved the structure. it was well thought out. tc. xmollyxx