im lost... whats this supposed to mean chica?

very nice! and NO WAY has my talent surpassed your's, no possible way! yours is excellent, and thanks!

I loved how you repeated 'but you'd never know' it really gave a lot of power and importance to what the poem was about. Great poem, well done!

GOOD!

Nice write! Thanks for commenting on my poem.. I appreciate =)

WHOA.can u say amazing? i think thats the best word to descirbe this one.or mayb PERFECTO!!!!! haha i love it sweetie..email me babe... sweetangel5590@aol.com

i love it. awesome its like your in my mind.. only you can express yourself better. hugs and kisses-hayley-

i loved it.,..ur poetry is awesome..i love reading ur poems....i could read them over and over again...dotn ever give up ur talent...alright..<3 byee