Amazing amazing job.. I really loved this.. It was great.. I can't express enough how great this was.. I liked how you had the different views from each person... And it was well worded and written.. I am clearly amazed.. Excellent job... wow very very good.. i'de give you a ten but 5 is the highest so i guess that will do..
Angel

Oh my goodness!! This is amzing!! Five gold stars and a place on my wall!! This was just terrific!! I absolutley loved how you were seeing something so strong as this through other peoples eyes and showing other points of veiws! You did a wonderful job i just absolutley loved this..I'm in shock!! Keep it up Eirisa!! Continueing makeing me proud!
Much love ~Chelsey~

this is really good. i like the way you write your poetry and i give you a 5.

Very good, good job

OH MY GAWWD!!!
THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!! he he....ur such an awesum poem writer!! i so envy ur poem skills!!! GRR...well totally 5 outta 5 top work!!!!!!