wow, LL, I really really liked this one.. very unique.. I esp liked the last 2 stanzas. :)

Excellent! I agree, very unique. Your poems rock! See, yours are WAY better than mine!!I mean like yours are --- < there

and mine are _____ <---there
:-) excellent poems

good job.. love it... keep it up and take care
Angel

awesome structure...im adding you to my favorites! keep the 5 flying from my fingers, haha