libido sickness, I succumb....very nice figures though considerin' the kinddaa music u listen too...tears to blood...that was very familiar....

this seems like a build up to something awesome...it gives a person that feelin oh haunted vaccum....but then maybe i am just crazy

nice. :D

Charlene

I was thinking of someone who felt so much about what they did, that at a certain point they didn't feel anything anymore. They just pretend to feel. Libido takes over where there was emotion, like a sickness/virus, making everything seem dark.They begin to want others to hurt the way they do.

hey email me the music... luv ya heaps missing you....

i MUST give you snaps for slipping the word 'libido' in your poem. very smells like teen spirit... or not really. but yay!

Awesome work. This poem really got through to me, so write more! Lots more! The world needs to know your gift. :)

Lots of Luv
~Kelly

Ya well...this ones really awesome...i ant the music...my id's ace_hearts
_88@hotmail.com

Great poem, especially with the stanzas slit up or whatever. My favourite bit would have to be:
Like
a rose
still untouched
by frost.
Like
a life
so unknown
but lost.

It was great, well done on another terrific poem!

you've got serious skills. i wish i were this good. you have your own unique style, and you have a knack for saying so much with so little. you don't use a lot of big words, you use a lot of little words, but with power. excellent work. ;-)

Wow i really liked this poem.. very well written - keep it up!

xx, PorteR

ps - thx for the comment on my poem =)

Honestly mate
u have the most talent i have seen in a while u should write a colatted book of ur poems or sumit coz honest to cold soup (i dont swear things on god) it is AMAZING!
keep scribblin'
catch ya

That was MAGNIFICANT! I hate it when people rate these things 4 simply because they cant understand the beauty of it. That was truly amazing piece of work and i hope that i can write such songs soon.
Keep writing, truly brilliant song!
luv kt

wow, this is so good! i'm so jealous. it was awesome, and i enjoyed reading it, seriously. and i don't suck up to anyone, so you can know that i'm honest. this poem is real. keep up the good work. ;)

jay

very beautiful, creative, thoughtful... amazing wording, very ..... i'm not sure of the word... but its a great poem.