Comments : Number One

  • 18 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    I enjoyed this made me feel upset tho... since this is how im feeling today...Xox Sherrie

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    i liked this....it makes ya think:)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    I loved this one as well however the first line on the second stanza after the word matter could use a semicolon I think

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Lol.. i found this very interesting.. it amused me.. great write! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "Never tell yourself you don’t matter your important too"

    I love that line! Because its so true..we often put others before our own happiness and we all find that as great of a thought as it is to have, it becomes our demise..top job on this poem..keep it up!