Welcome back,Megha....after such a long time ur writing a poem...this poem was very honest and touching i must say...Take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Sorry dear, I didn't notice that you were back.. This poem is wonderful. I can feel the emotions in it.. I am sorry if it is about true experience. Hope you are fine. IF you want to talk about it.. mail me.. anytime... Than this poem, you are important. So i hope you will take care of yourself.

About the poem.. if you feel like editing it.. I would suggest you to look again at the last stanza... The word "last" looks a bit forced to rhyme. And the last 2 lines exceeded the length way beyound the other ones.. Only if you feel its needed..

Take care,
Love, Trincy.

hey trincy thanks 4 commenting...yes it is on a true experience...i got 2 timed by the guy hu i trusted more than ne1 else in the world! can u blv it?????????
neways im okay..cant do nething bout it neway
and yes i did notice the last two lines going too long but i just wrote what came to my mind...ill try editing it if i can....i appreciate ute honesty thanks :-)

and thank u other guys 4 ure comments it means a lot....i feel better reading ure comments...thanks again :-)