This was a reelly cool peom!

Dang dude! seriously gave me goose
bumps! I have a vivid imagination-
"chords wer their veins and the faces"
thought it was going to be a regular
gangster flick-but awesome twist-didn't
know you did such macabre work.H5

Awsome story. You should be writing books man! Keep up the good work. 5.