great poem, well done.

very patriotic poem...Good write...take care...FIVE>>>

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

really good poem, but not all Americans are white...I happen to be Peutro Rican and American and trust me I have my own mixed culture that people around me are interesting in and love. I think your poem is good, but kind of offensive.

Your poem is good, I don't agree with your opinions, but that is what opinions are :) I like alot of your work, and I do take some of it offensively but hey, that's what poetry is all about, nicely done!