that was really good...though I would recemend not to ryme so much....ryming sometimes ruens the poem u are tring to write...

Hey awsome poem, I can relate to it.. Thanks for commenting on my poem!
Its nice to know that i'm not the only one wanting to escape this world, and my friends are too the only ones that keep me on this earth..

Luv Julia

OH wow!!!! this was an excellent poem!! It flowed very nicely!!!! it is perfect just the way it is!!! I really really liked this one alot!!!! keep it up!!!
I can't wait to read more of your poems!!!!

luv Elizabeth

THANX GUYS! :)