Great job Lipton! That was an awesome poem. Keep writing.

Great poem Lipton! By far the best! Peace!

awesome poem, you've got talent. it made me feel for you.

This poem is AWESOME Lipton! Keep in mind when the time is right, everything will work out great!

wow... that's deep. its really good.. so good i kinda want to cry now... i've been in a situation like this and my ending was tragic. anyways... WONDERFUL! definitely a 5.
<3 bella

Hey! thought your poems were excellent.

Excellent poem.