confidence is the key to poetry, believe that you are going to succed and that you will. I think you just need to put abit more thought into the poem. I know that you have put a lot of thought into the person who you were writing about.

I liked the message but the poem could have been a little bit better if you had thought about it.

hey i did. i'm not good at love poems. i'm into dark poems. i think i did good!