There is a saying "No person is worth ur tears and the person worthy will not make u cry"...Hope that the person ur seeing keeps u happy always...Take care...FIVE>>>

There is a saying "No person is worth ur tears and the person worthy will not make u cry"...Hope that the person ur seeing keeps u happy always...Take care...FIVE>>>

This needs some serious work in terms of structure, flow and content...you could lose a whole heap of words...don't write poems like normal prose,...it should sound like a poem no matter how it's placed.

I realise english may not be your first language...but yeah....this needs some thought put into it.