Very nice poem. Really enjoyed it. You have definate talent and I look forward to seeing a lot more from you. Thank you for your comments.

a very nice poem. please keep up the great work and take care! also, thank you for your sweet comment you left me. it means a lot to me! =)

~Grace

excellent poem. first and last sentence is really good. i liked the flow, too. thanks for the comments. i really appreciate them. take care:)

Very nice poem, it flows perfectly, not one flaw. Good job!

Very well written. I like it alot.

very good and emotional writing again! i hope to hear more from you... and i'd be glad if you read some more from me... i'm sure there's something i have written that you would like...