This is a very powerful and deep poem. I agree that it would get better and better each time you read it. I love it. Nice job.

Thanks you guys for commenting. Out of all the poems I've ever written, this ones my personal favorite, not because its dark, but because like I've said, it gives the feeling that each time I read it, it feels like it gets better and better. I think I'll name this poem my Teenage Years' Best Poem being as though I turn 18 in less than a year now.

--Bryce~

i (unfortunately) didn't get the chance to read the original version but based on Mario's comments, it seems like you've improved quite a bit and your happy about it. i liked how you question the readers. i particularly love the ending. it's deep... great poem.

p.s. 4th stanza, last line: is that supposed to be "WHY I was never told why?"

Heh, thank you ^_^

--Bryce~

"Am I really so different
To not be acknowledged that I exist?"
Great lines. They really make me question why you have to be the same to fit in and be noticed, but ur acknowledged, by many.... well by me atleast.
love ya'lls
PK