Very well written...I love the brutal honesty of this piece! Great job! Look forward to reading more~Holly

Very nice poem:)..I like the two last lines:) very nice:) good job:) Keep it up:)
-SaRs-

"Rip away my tear ducts,
And tell me no weep no more,
Laugh in the face of ridicule
Stare at my swollen eyes so sore"
i absolutly LOVE that. and the last 4 lines...so good. fantastic job, loved the words and events you used, so good

Amazing... i don't know what else to say. your writing is so powerful... i love it. great job!

how sad and twisted, um, my vocabulary is limited so im going to try and explain how i like it without the big words...it was awesome man!

Hey, this was awesome!! i can understand this...definetely keep on writing and take care...you have ALOT of talent...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy