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really good. i must say hun tht u r very talented.

Incredible hun...absoluuteeelllyyy brilliant! xxxxxxxxx You better not stop writing, you're just toooooo amazing! better than the best...one of the best on this site, I promise you that...you just need to get noticed hun...love it all...I've read every one, I can't think of many who are at your writing skill level...beautiful <3 You can go so far with this...I miss you baby...hope we talk again soon...love you logan <3 xxxx

-Mortalidaga
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thank you for soo much support, i cant tell you how much it means

Great poem...

Wow. That was pretty good.