awwwwww i love it keep smiling!

abby xxxx

This is such a beautiful poem.

Wow. Amazing poem. Such beautiful and descriptive words. Fantastic work

i agree that the opening lines were reaaaally great, it kinda made me think wow lol. Its really pretty but really sad *sighs* it was really good! :) keep them coming, beanxx

I read this the other day, but it hit me on the personal side, so I didnt (couldnt) comment. It is beautiful, if not heartbreaking.. I love your style.

Great ryhme, beautiful rythm and excellent choice of words and expression. I identify with those same emotions. Great work!!!!!

Your words seem to hit me really hard. I can relate to this a lot, because it seems that these words have ran through my head once before. Keep writing!

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~Ciao Lipton