OH MY GOSH! That was BEAUTIFUL! It really does sound like it came from deep inside your heart. I loved it. I could picture every word. And it really did touch my heart... that sounds really corney but it really got me thining about some people ... Awesome job! I envy your talent. Seriously, I do hope that you find your light....

wow....you have done it again. this poem is amazing. i love how you told a story of a girl who is shunned from soceity because she does not meet the world's expectations. And i love how you wrote that she was described as being a savage, it really portrays how she was an outcast and exiled from the world. fantastic job...really.amazing. keep it up

amazing, you pue this together so damn well, it came from the heart and came out amazing, what a way with words...