Death lingers,
Their anger evolves and so they deform,
Into what our imagination has in store,
Greatest fears,
The worst sins,
Raped from our minds,
Creates this insanity,
Destroying all man,
Utterly exacerbated,
Slicing through bone,
Be-headings enhanced their primitive minds,
Into something we lack."
loved that stance...so powerful. "god wqas a sinner, he let his creations do the rest" wow. that is such a powerful and brutal comparison, i loved it. great poem, good job

wow. that was definitely thought-provoking and dark. i kept seeing these gory, scary images as you described them. a masterpiece, i'd say. take care

hey Ian great poem!!

Thanks guys