wow again.. i've read all your poems there all great.. well done.. your so talanted it's not fair.. i wish i could write as well as you!

Very deep poem. Nice twist at the end.

Omg, wow!! this poem is beautiful. i wish i could write with such beauty. i wish my words could come out and flow like this. i really like this poem! im at loss i dont know quite how to explain the deepth of this poem. i could feel the pain and emotion flow through your words. like rain on a window after a heavy thunderstorm.

silent..painful..and beautiful
all mixed into one