Comments : No Single Tear

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was unique. Different which was good, a really great poem. Love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by stuart s

    I agree very unique which makes it amazing :) i loved it 5/5 well done

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Wow.. how haunting. What a way with words! Very well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by SeGrAdA

    Very different frm all da other poems i've read.
    u've got such a unique style
    i loved it =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    Definately a unique poem you have here, which is always refreshing to read. I loved the style in which you wrote this, it made the important parts more powerful. The speech of the girl definately added emotion and there was great imagery.
    Excellent write. 5/5

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    This poem is really nice!!
    It was well written and well expressed!!!
    Super sad, i liked it alot!!
    Uhm.. The flow wasnt that good but it ws still an awesome poem!!
    Keep up the gr8 work!!
    A well deserved 5!!!
    =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow. The story you told here was captivating. I was hooked from the beginning and curious to know what happens next. It was deep, emotional and everything a dark poem should be. It was unique and interesting and I enjoyed it very much.

    One mistake I found was
    "Your dead now"
    I think you mean "you're"

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by MeeyCie

    I didnt get it? it was a bit counfused. well, there I go for not be so good at english ;)
    But I liked it anyway. I like the sad ones. It makes me want to cry and I like to cry for things that is not my fault like Im bullied. well, you are a good writer :)

    xoxo Meey

  • 14 years ago

    by XxCutSoDeepxX

    Omg this poem is really sad and emoional its really excellent keep up the great work please read my poems and tell me how you think

  • 14 years ago

    by Madison

    Amazingly creepy, loved it