es muy bien liam!

please send me a private message, i'm planning on opening a poetry website and i would like your opinion/contribution.

"The future's not bright.
go our separate ways.
But why end with hate? After all these days?"
thoses lines blew me away. this poem is very touching and so deep, sad. WOW. tc xmollyxx

But why end with hate? After all these days?
Within I cry,
I'm not even gonna try...
try to talk to you.
Hey! thanx i loved those lines cos i cant really relate to them!thanx LoU xx