That was a really unique poem..Keep up the good work.. Luv Nicole =)

Hey gurl that was great
well got to go
Luv always Dayna

great
i wish i culdd write like that i can omly do freewrites

This one is very good moxie, I like it alot. It shows how you like to write. One thing that makes it better is that you didn't specify too much. There were enough specefics about what was going on, but broad enough to cover anyone who read it. Your audience was everyone, because everyone deals with death.