wow... very good.. I am always impressed..... Really.. wow.. awesome job... Keep it up..
Angel
(I just wrote a poem.. called Vampire..... blah blah long title.. coulf you read it and tell me what you think.. Thanks)

LOVE your poem one little thing though the phrase ~a window shattered
on purpose by hate
since you don't the pieces up
you don't have to contemplate~
well the part since you don't the pieces up, you might want to change so no one else sees it because i think its embaressing when ppl see it

That is killer.. i like your style. it makes sense and rhymes and that is my favorite kind of poetry. Keep it up and keep 'em good.

Hmmm...Strong poem....keep them coming and thanx for ur comments....take care ...

your extremely clever -- i love the "light your shine" Awesome. Your poems are really good, and if someone doesnt feel you, dont be blue. Know your great, no matter what you rate. plus u have a really good rating now, lol.

i like it it speaks the truth and well it like a opposite side of the rainbow you show good and bad you should check me out to tell me what ou think

what a truthful poem......it was how it was short and simple but right down the very point. You are talented and i've added you to my favorites :)

Wow! It's awesome! I was gonna comment on one of the others, but I decided to read this one, and it is very good! Not that your other ones arent =) anyways, very nice job!!

Very strong poem, nice message, and very nice flow...great job 5/5

Hey very nice poem i love it! 10/10 read my others please keep in touch.

*~Amber~*

i liked the words you chose and the symbolism, i especially liked the first stance, keep in touch

Oh wow, Lexi! This is awesome. I loved it. You used so few words and you said so much! Great job~Holly