excellent piece... enough said. take care:)

I love this peom each line just flows into the next! i like the concept of the character too it sounds like an interesting story!!

loooooooooove it it was great keep it up
and love to read the story
luv ya hun
~giggles~

Hey long time sence i stopped by and read some of your work...aah don't ask i've been here and there Anyways i have some great ghost poems for you to read. I'm getting back in the swing of things again.

For this poem now LOL....This was a great poem, the character great job, very creative, and i agree w/ sierra do you write fan fics for your character? Cause you should! Ok great poem you got a 5

Actually I've never written a fan fic, but I'll be sure to look into it. For now, though, I want to the story shes in now finished. Thanks for the comments everyone.

--Bryce~

wow! GREAT poem. I love it and wow can i ever connect to it. Like every one else said i give it a 5. better if i could. Keep wwriting i love your poems.
Love Always
PK
PS thanks for talking to me over IM. It helped alto.