This is so good, it gave me shivers haha, I think you're very talented! And i can relate to this poem, Infact i probably relate to all of it! well done! <3 Emz. Please check out some of my poetry.

Hey if you need someone to talk to, i know you don't know me but, I'm here.
think of me as a guardian angel...
You'll never meet me but you know somewhere out there I exist.

I feel that way all the time. You are not alone. Beautiful poem.

hey this caught my eye, its good... it has a solid rythem and rhyme scheme... keep it up...

sincerely
blackrose a.k.a. the beauty in death