lol i have goosebumps! wow....nice spooky story! perfect for halloween! o the blood part made me sick...you have to make a 3rd to explain how the mirroe go possed! thanx for your comments by the way
lexi lou

I am a big fan of spooky poems Jacki, I enjoyed this one very much..off to read part2, thanx, Timothy r

Good, but not a poem. Not very original.

it is a poem its a story line poem

I don't normally like free verse, (just a personal preference) but this one is pretty good, it flows and reads like a story really well. Great job! Peace

great