perfect but in my opinon you should have had blood in this one to....like i said this is such a good poetry story series you should have a 3rd that goes in the past!
lexi lou

I dont know how you can write two masterpieces in a row, and the longer the better I always say..You are really talented..keeep up the great work..Timothy r

you idot i wrote it and no i don't think i need to go back to second grade, and i do beilve I make sence!. But thanks for the lovely comment.

just one more thing before you go and start bashing peoples work you should really think about contributing to the site? Where are your poems?