i cANT BELIEVE NO ONE HAS COMMENTED! awesome poem! full of emotion and your words played out a story, one only you could have told o perfectly! keep in touch
lexi lou

An excellent poem.. I'm running out of words to type.. lol.. your poetry is just so amazing and leaves me speechless. Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

"only you could have told [s]o perfectly!"

"so amazing and leaves me speechless"

"omg, omg, omg! its like, SO, good!"

...is everyone here the kind of females that live theyre lives throwing up rainbows...?

seriously tho, what did you expect...? really, you thought you were gonna be with her some 10 years and marry her and be with her some 65? thats wishful thinking at best....