Very well written. I really like it. You might like some of mine, if you read them, please comment.

cool unique style niceeeeee!
n thanx for the comment

ill sip tea lol

That was really well written! I liked it! 5/5

BTW, thanks heaps for commenting on my poem!

xox, PorteR

This is a solid poem but I felt that it lacked something. It was just that I felt that you could have done more with your imagery.

I disagree with RyanSmith, if you had had more imagery, it would have made the poem not so simple, and so heartwrenching. This is my favorite of your poems that I've read so far. I think everyone would like to have just one friend. Anyway, a great poem. Keep it up.

i like it different concept the imageries r very unique n very well put together