wow, thats sad :( Very good though! Keep writing!

Wow your relationship with your sis sounds really similar to mine - tho i have never considered to write her a poem expressing my feelings - life is short and your poem has given me inspiration to do so :o)
Luv Eirisa

This is so weird! My older sister and I are 5 years apart and when she lived with us a while back we were close but not REAL close. She moved out because of a fight with my mom and ever since I've tried calling her and talking to her. She is too busy with her life. It's crazy your poem, I just want us to be closer. She moved out of the house when she was 17 and moved in and out, never staying long. Ayway I'm rambling....I like your poem.

ur poem is very good.. and even if i dont have a real sister.. my best friends is like a sister to me and i love her so much but she moved away and i miss her... keep ur head up! and keep writinig. awesome poem!

Great poem! Thats cute to write a poem to your sis! Keep writing! I like your stuff!

Well, I'm really close to my older sister, so when she graduates this year and goes off to college, I'm really gonna miss her. But my younger sister and I aren't close at all, and it doesn't really bother me, but I wonder if it bothers her. {hmmm} anyways, great poem, I'm gonna go check out some more of yours.
-Shannon-