Comments : First Love ~

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Oh gurl this was great really heart felt and sweet, and actually brought me back memories of my first boyf LoL CUTE I love how you can transform me back years with your words always able to make reminisce Maybeth you keep up this phenomenal work hun!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    This is a beautiful expresion of your thoughts and feelings, I love the way you let the story flow. Beautiful poem!!