I really enjoyed the imagery and your vocab shines greatly in this poem. You created a dark picture of this torn butterfly which lives inside your soul. You combined the concept of beauty and pain well. The only problem for me was in the third stanza, the flow seemed to break up a little. Apart from that great work, keep it up.

I really liked this poem. I generally don't like like poems about depression, but this was very original, I really enjoyed it, keep it up!

"ripped it’s flesh with mendacious lies
" is my favorite part. I haven't rated a poem 5/5 in a long time, but this poem definitely earned a 5. Be proud of this piece.

Again good use of descriptive language and in an educated way.

Keep writing
Nici