Great poem, good imagination. unfortunetely I have not much els eto say about the poem, so I will stop now, well done!

Indeed a Flame for the Soul.

Neat poem, I luved it all but these lines are awesome:
The avalanche of pain
Can’t reach down to my heart,
The past is a frozen memory,
Lost forever, to eternity.

Has really good description..hehe great work:o)
Shannon